Ramona H.S English Hand

1. The heading goes to the upper left corner. Heading contain student's and teacher's name, subject, period, and date.

2. Coma splice: CS
He is a Knight , she is mage

3.
Coma splice is the error in using coma while fused sentence consist the error of combining sentence without proper punctuation between them.

4, Coma is used to separate items or clause.

5.
Semicolon is used to separate two independent clauses and and list of item.

6.
Number ninety-nine or below.

7.
Title of the plays are underlined.

8.
"affect" mean change disturb or influence.
"Effect" mean result or perform.

9
There is used as pronoun or adj. They're is the contraction of they are. Their express possession.

10.
Parallel Structure express element in the same grammatical form.

Cite this Picture

"Mobile Suit Gundam Seed Destiny" online image Feb 25 ,05
http://en.wikivisual.com , May, 10 ,08
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Die for It

As a maverick , I am willing to sacrifice myself for the greater cause , such as war. A just war contain justice as well as bravery from the soldier; the fight for freedom is worth more than one life.Thus people have fought for what they believe is right. In the war of justice , no one dare to show fear nor discouragement. I am rather to be a jingoist rather than a craven person. I'm willing to be a educated person instead of an ignorance.

The Reflection

Every member in my group put the effort in this project. We collaborated well. Even though we didn't use music ,we have the background. In order to improve this project, we should "act" instead of reading those line. I wrote all of this in my personal point of view. I really enjoyed working together with them.

The gossip

Last year, there was a rumor about a meanest teacher in Gunderson. I considered myself as a maverick instead of a conformist. The students used Blogger as a tool to verbally attack the teacher. Soon, almost every sophomore believed to this cruel rumor. In addition to that they found the fault of the teacher in order to make it more valid. Obviously, the teacher was the victim and they were the “troublemaker”.

Being Trustworthy

Even though, I acknowledged the fact that my laptop was stolen, I didn’t have the courage to tell my parent. As the result, I was rounded for two week when they found out. Being “imprisoned” at home, I could not be entrusted to use the computer or any thing electronic. In order to regain my parent’s trust, I did the chores: washing dishes, cooking, laundry, and so on. Finally, they realized what they had done just hurt their son instead of teaching him the lesson. I was entrusted to use the computer again.

It's not about Money

  Money is a drug that make people addicted to it. Like a fairy, it grants their wishes . But what would they give in return. These are their soul and body. They become slaves but the master is money. Right,  they are slaves money.